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Post by mellochino on Nov 16, 2009 1:49:36 GMT
I'm really enjoying this story, keep up the good work =)
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Post by suse on Nov 16, 2009 4:19:00 GMT
Still enjoying this...but can we get rid of Kate soon .
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Post by jess on Nov 16, 2009 5:30:00 GMT
sorry Suse wish i could but shes needed for some of the vital storylines unfortunatly as much as i hate writing bit with her in it shes needed
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Post by suse on Nov 16, 2009 5:54:09 GMT
As long as its clear that Dec loves Didge and not her....I will tolerate it .
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Post by smilelino on Nov 16, 2009 10:45:57 GMT
I don't mind kate in it, because we can see that Didge and India are becoming more important for Declan than she is. I want to see Rebbecas reaction to seeing India.
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Post by jess on Nov 16, 2009 19:47:13 GMT
next update will hopefully come this arvo
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Post by jess on Nov 17, 2009 10:08:23 GMT
Chapter 18 Daddy Daughter Time
Declan gave up on trying to talk to Kate It was obvious she wasn’t going to for a while He decided it was closer to 3 than he thought so he headed back Didge had everything ready for him as soon as he got there “ Declan hi” she said” “ hey” Declan said “ now her routine is all on here she eats dinner here and takes a bath and she has a bed time routine to help her fall asleep and ive left some dinner in the fried for both off you “ Didge said “ oh thankyou” Declan said “ India” Didge yelled India came running out “ mummys gotta go now but daddys here too look after you ok” Didge said “ ok mummy “ India replied “ ok give mummy a kiss” Didge said India did “ ok thanx so much for looking after her Dec” Didge said “ no problem” Declan said “ bye” Didge said rushing out the door Declan looked at the list India was aloud to play until 6 o’clock “ daddy can you play ball with me” India asked Declan looked at India for a second “alright lets go” Declan said He and India went out and After a few hours Declan fed India and then put her to bed and read her a book “ alright good night India” Declan said getting up to turn off the light “ I love you daddy” India said Declan turned around He saw India smiling at him “ I love you two Indy” Declan said and turned off the light India closed her eyes Declan smiled at India and went out to the loungeroom He put on some tv Didges classes ran late into night Declan began to watch tv After a while he began to wonder if India was really asleep and went to check up on her India was asleep but she messed up her quilts so that there was nothing on her “ oh look at you what have you done” Declan said smiling to himself He propped India back up on her pillow being careful not to wake her up He then gently slipped the cover on to her He leant down and kissed her head “ good night Indy” Declan whispered And he closed the door And he went back out onto the couch Didge arrived home at 11 The tv was on And Declan was asleep on the couch happily snoring away Didge smiled She thought about waking him up but he looked peaceful She grabbed a blanket and threw it over him And then went and checked on India She was happily asleep to Didge smiled and then headed of to her own bedroom for some sleep
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Post by suse on Nov 17, 2009 10:51:14 GMT
Awww that was a lovely chapter. Hope they get back together soon ;D.
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Post by jess on Nov 17, 2009 10:58:04 GMT
No update will come tomorrow sorry everyone as i am going on an excursion with school to the Sydney Captiol theatre and wont be back till 1am sorry everyone
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Post by kate on Nov 17, 2009 11:05:39 GMT
just read from the start. I'm really enjoying it. I actually feel sorry for Kate in this, but only because it's fanfiction of course... looking forward to more.
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Post by smilelino on Nov 17, 2009 11:07:58 GMT
Beautiful update. So Declan the way he looked after India.
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Post by mellochino on Nov 17, 2009 11:10:58 GMT
Another great update, keep up the good work =D
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Post by jess on Nov 17, 2009 19:38:06 GMT
thanx everyone for the positive feedbeack next update will come tomorrow arvo
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Post by jess on Nov 18, 2009 21:42:10 GMT
change that will try to update this morning sooo tired after Wicked
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Post by suse on Nov 18, 2009 22:12:40 GMT
Looking forward to it ;D.
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