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Post by smilelino on Nov 10, 2009 20:41:47 GMT
Yes, very soon. I want to know what Declan wants to do or say. I just love this story.
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Post by jess on Nov 11, 2009 8:20:08 GMT
" Dec you havent been the same since you talked to Bridget" " do you wanna talk about it" " its complicated" " well if its upset you this much i think i deserve to know"
he watched as her brown curls bobbed she still had the same stunning blue eyes
Looking back on four years ago the times and moments Declan and Bridget shared will it all come back to Declan
find out on Secrets that cant stay Secret Chapter 12 Feelings that were felt before
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Post by jess on Nov 11, 2009 8:23:07 GMT
Chapter 12 Feelings that were felt before
Declan and Didge had not spoken in 3 days Not since she told him he was India?s father Didge had been round the house cleaning it up , looking after India She wanted a distraction except nothing worked All she could think about was Declan Declan wasn?t doing much better either He sat there thinking about India and Bridget How they were meant to be a family Except everything was a mess ? you ok Dec you haven?t been the same since you talked to Bridget? Kate said ? I know its really messed up? Declan said ? do you wanna talk about it? Kate said ? no its something I need to sort out with Bridget? Declan said ? but if its upset you like this I think I deserve to know? Kate said ? its complicated? Declan said ? come on you can talk to me about it? Kate said ? no I mean its really complicated? Declan said Declan got frustrated with Kate and left the house and went outside for some fresh air He saw Didge and India in the street playing with a ball and he smiled He looked closely at India She looked so much like Bridget but his features were in there Declan thought back to four years ago Back to their first date Their first kiss The first time he told her he loved her The kissing booth He smiled as he remembered his thoughts Of how much he loved Bridget He had this feeling inside of him And he couldn?t figure out what it was He watched as Bridget and India play He looked at Didge closely She still had the same stunning blue eyes that he fell in love with And her brown curls bobbed as she ran around She had a smile on that lit up her whole face Then he remembered what that feeling was It was how he felt Wherever he was around Bridget Little did he know Kate was watching him
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Post by smilelino on Nov 11, 2009 10:26:53 GMT
Finally Kate can see what is so obvious to all of us. But i think Declan and bridget should talk more about Dec being the father. Thanks for the update.
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Post by jess on Nov 11, 2009 11:08:15 GMT
" i saw you outside" " i saw you looking at Bridget" " are you bored of me" " then why were you staring at your ex - Girlfiriend" " look your making a big deal out of nothing"
Is this the first of relationship problems For Declan Napier and Kate Ramsay
Find out of Secrets that cant stay secret Chapter 13 Secrets from loved ones
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Post by jess on Nov 11, 2009 11:09:35 GMT
Chapter 13 Secrets from loved ones
Declan walked back into No.24 Kate was sitting on the couch with her arms folded ? whats up? Declan said ? I saw you outside? Kate said ? yeah I was getting some fresh air? Declan said ? saw you looking at Bridget? Kate said ? I was watching them while I was out there? Declan said ? well it didn?t look like that to me? Kate said ? it was for entertainment? Declan said ? what are you bored of me? Kate said ? no of course not? Declan said ? well then why were you staring at your ex girlfriend? Kate said ? look your making a big deal out of nothing im going out? Declan said He went to harolds store He saw Bridget there having a drink He decided to see of she would talk to him ? hi can I sit down? Declan said Bridget motioned for him to sit down? ? look im sorry for the way I acted...? Declan started to apologise ? look I understand Declan I would probably be the same? Didge said ? I feel really stupid though? Declan said ? so you should? Didge said smiling Declan smiled back ? but I decided that I want to know her she is our daughter after all? Declan said Didge smiled ? that was what I was hoping you would say? Didge said ? she looks so much like you? Declan said ? she got your smile though , before I came back when she was smiling it made me think of you? Didge said Declan smiled ? is there a time when we can just talk about all this? Declan said ? im free tomorrow? Didge said ? great so am I? Declan said ? come over to my house so we can talk then ill get Donna to bring India over? Didge said ? sounds good? Declan said ? by the way have you told Kate yet? Didge said ? no I was hoping we could talk before I told her? Declan said ? alright well I have to go pick up India ill see you tomorrow? Didge said getting up and going with Declan staring after her
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Post by smilelino on Nov 11, 2009 14:54:51 GMT
Good on them for being mature, and wanting to talk it properly through. Thanks for this great update.
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Post by jess on Nov 11, 2009 19:31:56 GMT
Chapter 14 An old flame rekindled
Declan was getting ready to go to Bridgets Kate came out ? where do you think you?re going? Kate said ? out? Declan said walking out Kate went over to the window She watched as Declan walked over to Bridgets ? yeah ok just going out? Kate said Declan knocked on the door of No.26 Didge answered ? hey come in? Didge said as she let Declan in ? do you want a tea or coffee? Didge said She sounded breathless ? yeah coffee please are you ok? Declan asked ? yeah ive just been on the run all morning? she said fumbling with the coffee jar lid Declan looked at all the photos around No.26 Didge came back with the coffee?s And they sat down ? ok so what do you want to know? Didge said ? whens her birthday? Declan said ? June 23rd? Didge replied ? who was with you when she was born? ? Riley was? How do I know shes actually my daughter? this question had burned inside of him ? after she was born before her birth certificate was made up I got her DNA tested because I wanted to be sure actually ive got everything you need to know in a box hold on? Didge got up and ran out Declan stood up A little while later Didge returned with a box ? ok here are the DNA test results? she handed them to Declan And there was the evidence India Parker Mother ? Bridget Parker Father ? Declan Napier ? I guess it official she is ours? Declan said ? Declan I wouldn?t lie to you about something like this? Didge said Didge took out a picture And went over to Declan What they ddnt realise is that they were standing quite close to each other Didge held the picture up to him ? she was just a baby then? Declan said ? it was just after she was born? Didge said Declan stopped looking at the photo Instead he looked at Didge ? you haven?t changed one bit? Declan said He placed one hand on her neck brushing away her curly hair of her neck ? you haven?t either? Didge said They leant in closer to each other until they were only inches part ? ive missed you so much? Didge said And Declan leant straight in and kissed her Didge was surprised at his reaction But she closed her eyes soon And her hands wrapped around his neck Soon Declan rammed her up against the wall They were non ? stop kissing Not stopping for breath or anything Finally Declan pulled away Both of them gasping for breath They looked into each others eyes And without saying any words They both knew what each other was thinking They needed to be somewhere more comfortable Just like 4 years before Declan picked Didge up and began to walk to the bedroom ? you know this was alot easier 4 years ago? Declan said ? Shut up Declan? Didge said and Began kissing him again
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Post by smilelino on Nov 11, 2009 21:24:09 GMT
They did not do much talking, did they!!!! Still i am not upset at all, over the direction their conversation took. Even though, he should have broken up with Kate, before sleeping with Bridget, it would make it even more special for Decget. But thanks again for writing more of this fantastic story.
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Post by jess on Nov 12, 2009 5:08:07 GMT
Chapter 15 Things that never should’ve happened
Clothes lay on the floor of Didges room Didge and Dec lay in her bed under the covers They lay in each others arms “ I missed you” Declan said “ I missed you too” Didge said “ when I frst saw you with India I thought you were with another man and I felt so…” Declan said trailing off “ I know” Didge said “ Didge it was always you” Declan said Didge rolled over to face him “ we really shouldn’t be doing this” Didge said “ I know” Declan said Declan leant in closer And he kissed her slowly Didge smiled at him Didge rolled over to the edge of the bed and check the time “ oh god Donna will be over any minute” Didge said jumping out of bed and quickly getting changed “ come on” Didge said hurrying off to the bathroom to do her hair Declan got up and and got changed to No sooner had Didge finished in the bathroom a knock came at the door Declan came out of the bedroom and stood there “ just act normal” Didge said going for the door Declan nodded She opened the door and India ran in “ mummy” she shouted “ hello little girl were you good today” Didge said “ she was an angel” Donna said walking in with India’s stuff “ thanx for looking after her today” Didge said “ I love looking after my little goddaughter” Donna said while walking out Declan couldn’t stop staring at India She was hanging on by Didge “ goddaughter” Declan said “ I made Donna and Ringo India’s godparents” Didge said Declan nodded Didge bent down next to India “ India this is your daddy” Didge said India looked up at Declan “ go say hi to daddy” Didge said Declan bent down as India started to walk to Declan When India reached Declan she stared at him “ hi daddy” India said For some reason tears welled up in Declans eyes India reached her hands out to him And Declan opened his India gave Declan a hug Declan looked up at Didge “ she really is ours” Declan said smiling at Bridget “ she is” Didge said Meanwhile Kate had been sitting at the window Declan hadn’t been back for hours She decided she had enough of this and stormed over to No.26 She didn’t bother knocking she just stormed straight through the door And she didn’t like what she saw She saw India hugging Declan and him hugging her back Didge was smiling at them until she realised Kate was there “ Kate” Didge said “ what is going on Declan” Kate said Declan stood up and both looked at each other They both had the same look on their face
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Post by smilelino on Nov 12, 2009 10:27:33 GMT
What will happen next. I loved this update. Thanx
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Post by jess on Nov 12, 2009 10:33:51 GMT
ive only written half the next update ill try and get it finished
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Post by jess on Nov 12, 2009 11:06:42 GMT
Chapter 16 Problems between three people
“ well” Kate said Didge and Dec just looked at each other again “ Kate you better sit down” Didge said They all sat down “ Kate we need to tell you something” Declan said “ what is it” Kate said “ well as it turns out im India’s father” Declan said Kate sat there stunned “ w…w…what” Kate said After a while she spoke “ how” she said “ well 4 years ago when I left the street I found out I was pregnant” Didge said “ how do you know shes really his” Kate said “ just after she was born I got her DNA tested he is her father” Didge said “ I don’t believe you” Kate said Didge got up and got the results for the DNA test and handed them to Kate “ its true Kate” Declan said “ I don’t believe this” Kate said getting up and storming out Declan sighed “ ill be back” he said to Didge He ran out after Kate who was walking back to No.24 “ KATE” he shouted Kate kept walking He kept shouting to her as she kept walking He finally stopped infront of her “ get out of my way” Kate said sourly “ no” Declan said “ HOW COULD YOU HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME” Kate said “ IT JUST HAPPENED” Declan shouted back “ WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME DECLAN” Kate shouted “ it wasn’t on purpose but weather you like it or not she is my daughter” Declan said Kate stormed off Declan decided to return to No.26 Didge was in the kitchen “ knock knock” Declan said “ come in” Didge said Declan was already in “ how did it go” Didge asked nervously “ there was shouting and storming off” Declan said “ im sorry” Didge said “ don’t worry she’ll come around eventually” Declan said “ do you want a coffee” Didge asked “ yeah that would be nice please” Declan said following Didge into the kitchen He sat down as Didge made the coffee’s and brought them over They sat down “ I don’t think we should tell anyone about what happened this morning.” Didge said “ I don’t think so at least not for a while anyway” Declan said “ I don’t want to ruin things with Kate for you guys any more than I have” Didge said “ but thankyou for telling me about India” Declan said “ you needed to know” Didge said And they kept on just talking to each other for the rest of the afternoon
next update wont come till saturday night
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Post by smilelino on Nov 12, 2009 18:14:37 GMT
Don't worry. You were so great with all the other updates. Thanks for this great one.
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Post by jess on Nov 16, 2009 0:58:42 GMT
Chapter 17 What is love without trust
Declan walked back home to No.24 after chatting with Didge Kate was sitting in the loungeroom with her head in her hands “ Kate” Declan said “ stay away from me” Kate said “ no” Declan said Kate looked up at Declan Her eyes were red rimmed Shed obviously been crying “ the thing I don’t get is why didn’t you tell me” Kate said “ I only just found out myself” Declan said “ but why did this even happen it shouldn’t have happened to us , we had a whole life ahead of us” Kate said “ and we still do” Declan said sitting down beside Kate “ but now my life involves something more” Declan said “ yeah something more important than me” Kate said running off into the bedroom Declan sighed Then he remembered Rebecca was back from Portugal she came back yesterday Maybe he should go over and tell her about India He went and knocked on the door of No.22 Paul answered the door “ hey Declan come in mate” Paul said He went in “ is mum about” Declan asked “ yeah shes just upstairs, Rebecca” Paul called Rebecca came down stairs “ Declan what are you doing here” Rebecca came over to him and gave him a hug “ just came to see how you are” Declan said “ oh come on sit down” Rebecca said And Paul, Rebecca and Declan all sat down “ so how was Portugal and how is Ollie and Carm and Chloe” Declan said “ oh they’re wonderful, Chloe’s grown up so much and Oliver and Carmella are wonderful they’re doing so well” Rebecca said Declan looked down at the floor “ so how are you and Kate” Rebecca asked “ were on rocky ground at the moment” Declan said “ what why” Rebecca asked “ it’s a long story” Declan said “ we have time” Rebecca said “ well Bridget is back in town” Declan said “ really where is she” Rebecca said “ living next door actually” Declan said “ anyway go on” Rebecca said “ a couple of days ago she told me something that’s changed my life and Kate’s” Declan said “ well what is it” Rebecca said “ well it goes along the lines of you’re a grandmother again” Declan said “ a grandmother .. but that would mean she….” Rebecca said “ yes” Declan said “ and you…” Rebecca said “ yes” Declan said “ and you’re a father” Rebecca said “ yes to a little girl” Declan said “ a girl oh whats her name” Rebecca said “ India Parker” Declan said “ when can I see her” Rebecca asked “ well I have to check with Bridget im actually heading over to see them soon ill tell you then ok’ “ alright well ill see you soon” Rebecca said Declan smiled “ bye “ he said and walked over to No.26 As soon as Bridget called come in he went in And no sooner India had seen him “ Daddy “ she screamed and ran across the loungeroom ‘ hey little girl” Declan said when he picked her up You could hear a slight laugh form Didge in the kitchen “ were you good today for mummy” Declan asked “ yes I was” India replied proudly Didge came in from the kitchen “ hi Declan” she said Declan put India down “ I told mum about India today I hope that’s ok” Declan said “ that’s fine she is her grandmother after all” Didge said “ she wants to meet her” Declan said “ well not today India’s going to day care while I go to uni” Didge said “ going to uni” Declan said “ yeah im in my third year im studying medicine” Declan said “ of course I remember” Declan said Didge smiled “ ill look after her if you want” Declan said “ really” Didge said “ yeah it’ll give me a chance to bond with her” Declan said “ yeah that’d be nice come by at 3 ok” Didge said “ yeah ill come back soon” Declan said “ see you then” Didge said as she smiled Declan went back to No.24 Kate was back out of the couch “ how can I ever trust you again” Kate said And before giving Declan a chance to reply she got up and slammed the bedroom door
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