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Post by jess on Nov 5, 2009 11:20:59 GMT
i have this posted on the official Neighbours website but i thought maybe id post it over here ill warn you now Kate Ramsay is involved with this one but it does get better if you dont want to endure the Kate Ramsay bits then dont read and i wont continue it but it does get better as i go on anyway read the preview thingy Jess xxx
Secrets that can’t stay secret
4 years ago
Declan Napier broke up with his girlfriend Bridget Parker
To be with Kate Ramsay
Bridget left Ramsay St after that
Knowing she was pregnant with his child
9 months later
She had a baby girl and called her India Parker
She never told Declan about India
After 4 years Declan begins to think about Bridget
So whats about to happens when
She returns to Erinsbourough
With 3 year old India
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Post by jeffiner1892 on Nov 5, 2009 11:49:22 GMT
I've been reading this one on N.com, it's really good.
I particularly like the most recent chapter on there. ;D
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Post by jess on Nov 5, 2009 12:04:11 GMT
lol thanx
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Post by jess on Nov 5, 2009 12:05:24 GMT
The Past part 1
Text to : Didge From: Dec
We need to talk Street in 10 Xxx
Didge had no idea what was about to happen when she stepped foot in the street She saw Declan standing there by No.22 “ whats up” she said to him as she came up to him “ I have to talk to you” Declan said He took a deep breath “ we can’t go out anymore” “ what” He sighed and put his head down “ why” tears were welling up in her eyes “ I want to be with someone else” he said The tears fell from Didge’s eyes They were supposed to be together forever “ who” she managed to choke out He looked over to No.24 “ Kate” he looked straight at her She broke down in tears “ im sorry” he said She just looked back at him And with that Declan turned towards No.24 Didge watched on as he left And she ran back into No.26 In uncontrollable tears
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Post by smilelino on Nov 5, 2009 12:29:48 GMT
Can't wait to read more. I always had the feeling, would Didge still be alive, then Kate would have had triangle with Decget. Thanks for this new story.
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Post by jess on Nov 5, 2009 20:16:24 GMT
The past part 2
Declan knocked on the door of No.24 Kate answered and smiled Declan sighed “ I did it I broke up with her” Kate smiled again and let him in Didge returned home Miranda was making plans to move She looked over to Didge “ oh Bridget whats wrong” She just looked at her and ran to her room 3 days later Didge had not come out of her room Rachel and Donna had come over to find out why “ 3 days ago she came home in tears she wouldn’t tell me” Miranda told them They went in Didge was on her bed “ Didge whats wrong” Rachel asked No answer “ Didge we need to know” Donna asked After a long time of silence she answered “ Declan broke up with me” silent tears running down her face “ oh Didge” Rachel said and immediately sat down beside her “ itll be ok” Donna said “ how I loved him and now im..” she stopped mid sentence “ your what” Donna said eyeing her “ Didge” Rachel said She sighed “ im pregnant with his baby” “ what” they both said at the same time “ are you sure” Donna said She nodded “ you need to tell Declan” Rachel said “ hes made it pretty clear he dosent want me anymore he wants to be with Kate” Didge said She broke down in tears Donna and Rachel couldn’t say anything they only sat with her
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Post by smilelino on Nov 5, 2009 22:10:48 GMT
Stupid Declan. He leaves the best thing in his life. Good for Didge, that she has her friends. (how i miss those teengroup) I wonder what will happen next. thanks for updating it so fast.
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Post by jess on Nov 6, 2009 4:59:14 GMT
The Past part 3
Didge was having a last look around her room Miranda was taking her to their new home today Steve was staying behind until he could sell the vet practice Didge hadn’t seen Declan much only briefly at the general store She had to go buy some things for the trip “ I’ll be back soon mum” She nodded and left As she went into the general store she saw Rachel and Donna sitting talking and she saw Kate and Declan at another She tried to avoid Declans face and she went to sit down next to Rachel “ how are you” Rachel asked “ im ok just a bit sad to be leaving” Didge replied “ I can’t believe you’re going today” Donna said “ im gonna miss you guys but you have to promise me one thing “ Didge said “ what” they both replied “ you can’t tell Declan about the baby” she said “ but he needs to know hes the father” Rachel said “ hes got a life now he dosent need me to make it come crashing down” she sighed “ I gotta go I see you later” Didge got up to go to the counter She hadn’t told him she was leaving and she didn’t care She looked over to him He was staring at her She ignored it and took her items and left Ramsay St Miranda was putting the last of their stuff in the boot Didge was looking around Rachel and Donna were standing out the front of No.28 Declan had come out of No.22 And he saw Didge packing her stuff in the car He was about to go over when Kate had come behind him and stopped him Didge looked at her friends She went over to them and gave them a hug “ I’ll miss you both so much” They nodded “ we’ll miss you too” “ come on Bridget” Miranda called She went over to the car and opened the door She looked round Ramsay St one last time She saw Declan standing there with Kate A tear ran down her face as she and Declan looked into each other’s eyes she forced herself to look away and she got in the car and the car drove off
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Post by smilelino on Nov 8, 2009 8:40:40 GMT
Oh, no Declan why did you listen to Kate. You should have gone over to Didge. Can't wait to read more.
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Post by jess on Nov 8, 2009 10:04:06 GMT
The past part 4
“ ok one more push” the doctor urged Didge on to push “ come on you can do it Didge” Riley said Miranda was with Steve visiting Ramsay St But as soon as they heard they were rushing back She pushed as hard as she could Then crying noises were heard “ it’s a girl” the doctor said “ is she ok” Didge asked “ she looks just fine” the doctor said The doctor went away with the little girl “ you did a great job” Riley said Didge was still trying to catch her breath The doctor was back with the little baby girl She handed her to Didge “ she’s beautiful” Riley “ she is” Didge replied “ were going to take you back to your old room now” the doctor said Riley stepped aside as the nurses came and pushed the bed Once Didge was back in her old room She looked at her little girl She saw Declan in her Riley came in He came and sat by Didge “ don’t you think you should tell Declan” “ tell him what “ “ you know what I mean” Riley said “ oh yeah totally I ring him up hi Declan just want you to know I had your daughter” Didge said “ well can I hold my niece” Riley asked Didge looked at her daughter She carefully passed her to Riley “ have you got a name for her” Riley asked “ no im trying to think of one” Didge replied Riley passed her back to Didge “ she’s got your eyes” Riley said looking at her “ she’s got Declans colour hair “ Didge said Riley looked down at the little girl “ whares mum and dad” Didge asked “ I called them they’re on their way back it may take a while” Riley replied He handed the baby back to Didge There was a knock at the door “ come in” Didge replied Miranda and Steve came in They looked at the baby “ a girl” Didge said They smiled and came over She passed her over to Miranda “ she looks like you but you can see Declan in her” Miranda said Didge sighed She wished people would stop saying his name “ were sorry we missed the birth” Miranda said “ Ramsay St is a bit far away from here” Steve said “How is everyone” Didge said “ they’re fine we saw Declan” Steve said “ how is he” she said “ still the same he asked how you were” Steve said “ you didn’t say anything did you” Didge asked “ no we didn’t but you really should” Miranda said She passed her back to Didge “ he made it pretty clear he wanted to be with Kate” She looked at her baby Ramsay St Declan now lived with Kate Declan had come in just after seeing Steve and Miranda leave suddenly He came in with a confused look on his face “ you ok Dec” Kate asked “ umm yeah sorta” he replied “ talk to me” she went over to him “ I just saw Miranda and Steve leave and Steve lives here” he said Kate just shrugged and left He had a feeling it was about Didge but he didn’t know why
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Post by smilelino on Nov 8, 2009 10:11:29 GMT
Quick Declan go and find out. Play police, and look for Didge. Another great update. Good that Didge had at least her brother with her.
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Post by jess on Nov 8, 2009 11:02:07 GMT
The present
“ are you sure you want to go back to Ramsay St” Riley asked “ yeah India needs to know who her father is” Didge replied as she got her stuff into a taxi India was by her side “ Give Uncle Riley a hug Indy” She ran up to Riley and hugged her “ I’ll miss you little girl” She gave a cheeky smile Then Didge hugged him “ thanx for everything” Didge said She hugged him Riley smiled and she got into the taxi with India Ramsay St Declan was walking along in the park He saw all the kids and toddlers playing He saw a little girl about 3 years old she had curly hair and blue eyes She reminded him of Didge She was playing in the park But she tripped and fell over Declan was about to go over and help her when he heard Didges voice “ India” she called Declan thought he was imagining it But then he saw Didge go over to India The girl was laughing as Didge blew a raspberry on her cheek And he watched as they played hide and seek He shook his head “ im imagining this” he said as he walked off No but he wasn’t imagining Didge was really there with 3 year old India Ramsay St Declan was outside putting the garbage out A taxi pulled up He turned around Declan wondered who was in there But he didn’t have time to see Because Kate came out of No.24 “ hey whos that” she asked “ I don’t know” he replied He was very interested as to see who was in that car But Kate grabbed his face And they made out Didge stepped out of the car And she picked up India She looked around She saw Declan and Kate She sighed “ I’ll be back in a minute for my stuff “ she said to the driver And she went inside with India
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Post by smilelino on Nov 8, 2009 11:08:20 GMT
Yeh, Didge is back. Now it starts... can't wait to read more.
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Post by jess on Nov 8, 2009 11:51:39 GMT
Didge had surprised her parents by not telling her she was coming She didn’t tell anyone she was coming She knocked on the door “ it’s open” Miranda called “ be quiet for a minute ok sweetie” she told India And she opened the door Miranda and Steve were in the kitchen And she stood there waiting to see if they would notice Miranda walked out into the lounge room and saw Didge standing there She rushed over to her and India “ oh darling what are you doing here” Miranda asked “ I thought id surprise you” she said as she put India down “ and look at you my little girl” she said as she hugged India Steve had come in “ Didge what are you doing here” Steve asked “ I thought id surprise you guys” Didge replied She looked at India “ vie gotta go get my stuff from the taxi I’ll be back” she said She went outside The taxi was still there And so was Declan She just didn’t know it She went out to the taxi Declan saw her come out Didge knew he was out there And she didn’t want to look at him She grabbed her stuff and the taxi drove off Steve came out to help her Followed by India India ran up to her mum And Declan looked confused “ mummy” she shouted “ mummy” Declan repeated quietly Didge had picked her up “ Grandpa’s scaring me” India said “ I Grandpa being a naughty man” Didge aced She nodded Didge put India down and she ran back inside She got her stuff out Declan couldn’t stop staring He couldn’t believe how much India looked like Didge He stared at his ex girlfriend She has changed a bit her hair was longer and she had a smile on her face now Declan was wondering whether he should go over and say hi “ let me take that sweetheart” Steve said grabbing the suitcase off her “ no its alright dad I can take it “ Didge said as she tried to grab the suitcase Steve ran inside with Didge chasing after him “ same old Didge” Declan thought Kate had been watching him from up the top of No.24 Declan walked back inside “ im just going out I’ll be back” Kate said “ yep” was Declans reply As soon as Kate was gone he took out a box It had all his old photos of him and bridget in it He spent the afternoon looking at them
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Post by smilelino on Nov 8, 2009 12:14:13 GMT
You are so great, for giving us so quickly new updates. I am really liking this story.
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