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Post by Chris on Aug 22, 2009 20:45:22 GMT
Damb That Caitlin Stasey!!! I'm looking foward to Eloise and James Bridget and Declan loosing their virginity together. Another fantastic Installment Suse, keep them comming.
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Post by rebeccag on Aug 24, 2009 13:32:21 GMT
ooooh liking this fic. Keep it going ^_^
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Post by smilelino on Aug 26, 2009 21:38:34 GMT
Thanks for updating. I loved it. It was great. Just loving this story.
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Post by Bee on Sept 3, 2009 10:57:15 GMT
suse..i think its time you updated!!!
haha jks but please update..i love this story (:
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Post by suse on Sept 4, 2009 2:49:01 GMT
I hope to have it finished by the end of the weekend. Its half done but its proving to be a challenge. I want this one to be good.
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Post by suse on Sept 5, 2009 7:11:21 GMT
DISCLAIMER - This story is fictional and in no way reflects the actions or day to day activites of the characters involved. In other words..ITS MADE UP!!
This is as good as its gonna get I'm afraid.
Chapter 14 Eloise followed Caitlin down to the wardrobe department, with James close behind. They were both very much looking forward to the days events, until Caitlin mentioned who was directing.
"Oh great! Not Karl," James groaned to Eloise, "he never lets us get away with anything."
Karl Zwicky was a stickler to the rules and he stuck to the script to the letter. A few of the directors liked their little ad-lib kisses here and touches there, they embraced it in fact...but not Karl.
"Why would they give us Karl for a moment like this," James continued to complain.
"Maybe they want us to behave," Eloise shrugged.
"Yeah well they aren't going to have much luck today," James whispered cheekily.
"Ssshhhh," Eloise giggled. "Caitlin will hear us."
"What are you two doing," Caitlin looked suspicious as she headed for the clothes rack.
"Nothing," Eloise began innocently, until she saw her outfit for the day, "What the hell? I am not wearing that."
She held up the black and white skirt and red jumper and sighed in dismay.
"Why do they torture this poor girl with some of these horrific outfits? I mean what girl would wear this when she was planning on seducing the love of her life."
"Oh come on. Its cute," Caitlin laughed, "and you haven't seen the hat yet."
Eloise's jaw hit the floor when she saw the mustard coloured knitted cap.
"That is the ugliest thing I have ever seen," she exclaimed.
James burst out laughing when he saw the look on her face.
"Aww I like it," he laughed, "Its very in. I heard mustard is the new black this season."
"James I would stop right there. You aren't giving me much confidence in your taste in fashion," she retorted.
"I can't wear it," she sighed.
"I dare you to wear it," he challenged with a glint in his eye.
"Nuh, I don't do dares" she said looking him dead in the eye.
"All right then. What about bribery? I'll give you $50 and dinner at my house…tonight...if you wear it," he said cheekily.
She couldn't wipe the smile off her lips as James raised his eyebrows, encouraging her to say yes.
"Oh all right. How can I refuse that bribe," she said rolling her eyes.
They headed off to get changed and then to make up before meeting back on set.
"See," James said to her, "you look adorable."
"Mmm! Certainly not as good as you in this footie uniform," she said trying to check him out discreetly. They grinned at each other like lovesick school kids before Karl rudely interrupted them.
"Ok everyone needs to take their places please," he droned in his usual monotone voice.
"Be ready for a slight change in the script," James whispered to her and winked before he headed out the door.
"Eloise are you ready," Karl drawled.
"Um...wait", she said nervously.
She couldn't do it. She decided in this scene the hat had to go. She ripped it off and fixed her hair before she was finally ready.
"Are we ready now?" he said sarcastically.
"Yep! I'm ready now," she answered, pleased with herself.
"Ok… Action," Karl called out.
Bridget flung the door open.
Declan took a deep breath to begin his lines, but...
"Where's the hat?" James exclaimed loudly.
"I can't wear it in this scene OK," she blurted out.
"CUT!" Karl yelled.
"You are such a chicken," James said mouth agape.
"Do you really want to be having sex with a girl who wears a mustard coloured beanie?" she asked.
"You took the bribe!" he exclaimed,
"I said Cut," Karl raised his voice, but still the tone remained the same.
"But you never said I had to wear it in every scene. I'll wear it later. I promise," she practically begged.
"Well there is no dinner for you if you don't keep up your end of the bribe."
"Cut cut cut," Karl began again, "Guys you aren't following the script."
They finally started paying attention to their director.
"No kidding," James said sarcastically.
"Lets take this from the top shall we," Karl said. He was getting frustrated already.
Eloise gave James a sweet forced smile as she closed the door on him.
"Be ready for a surprise he whispered before the door closed."
Karl got himself back into position.
"Ok! Action" he said.
Bridget flung the door open.
Declan "Just do it."
Didge "Do what?"
Declan "This"
James grabbed her hand and pulled her in slowly for a deep, tender kiss. Eloise could feel her legs turning to jelly as the kiss became more intense.
Karl was stunned and he frantically rifled through the pages on his script. He was pretty sure that wasn't supposed to happen.
"CUT!" he finally called out.
But they wrapped their arms around each other and continued kissing, much to his horror.
"Cut cut cut!" he said frantically.
They begrudgingly broke apart and looked into each other's eyes. They had missed each other so much and they both needed that kiss to be able to carry on with the day. Before they knew it Karl was storming over to them.
"No where in this script does it say that you are supposed to kiss there," he said waving the script around wildly in the air.
"Are you sure?" James asked innocently, "I am sure my script says that I walk in and Didge grabs Dec's hand and starts kissing him."
"That's in another scene I believe," Karl responded trying to keep his usually controlled temper in check.
"Oh of course...sorry," James said.
"Yeah our mistake…sorry," Eloise continued.
"Lets try again shall we?" Karl sighed as he stormed back to his position, "this is going to be a long day."
I think we should finish this scene off properly before his head explodes," Eloise whispered to James as he headed back out the door.
"OK! Anyway I have another surprise in store for later," he smiled mischievously as she closed the door on him once again.
They switched into professional mode then and completed the scene without a hitch, much to Karl's relief.
"Thank God," Karl muttered under his breath," Five minutes and then we will carry on with the next scene.
James and Eloise sat themselves down on the lounge on the set of number 26, in readiness for their next scene.
"You are so evil," Eloise whispered to him.
"You loved it," he whispered back as she smiled at him.
He became serious then as he searched her eyes.
"I needed you," he mouthed to her, and she could feel a tingle starting in the base of her spine.
"I needed you too," she mouthed back. They both desperately wanted to jump into each other's arms, but they knew that was impossible. They were living dangerously enough as it was. The intensity between them was rudely interrupted by Karl's voice.
"Right, now we are going to start the scene by panning the camera across to you guys as you kiss. So I need you to kiss, count to 5 and then begin the dialogue.
They smiled at each other and just nodded as Karl resumed his position. James ran his fingers through her hair as they slowly leaned towards each other and their lips met lightly.
"Excuse me! I haven't said action yet," Karl said rolling his eyes.
"Sorry," they mumbled stifling a giggle.
"Ok…Action!"
They slowly began kissing again and the camera panned across to them as planned, however the count of 5 came and went as the 2 co-stars continued to kiss well passed the deadline. They couldn't stop themselves and their kissing became more passionate as their tongues explored each other's mouths.
"Cut!' Karl sighed in despair and walked over to them, shoulders slumped.
"What was that? Can you not count?" he said glaring at them with folded arms.
They both looked up at him innocently.
"Well I was only up to 3," Eloise said looking at him with a mock confused expression on her face, as if he had no right to complain what so ever.
"Really," James looked at her and feigned a shock expression, "I was only up to 2."
Karl rubbed his forehead with his fists trying to keep his temper under control.
"Maybe we could count a bit faster," Eloise suggested sweetly.
"Yes! That would be good," Karl said through gritted teeth, "And did I see tongues. I better not have seen tongues. This is a G rated show you know and tongues don't belong in it."
"You don't need to remind us," James sighed.
"I mean they are just about to have sex for the first time for God sake. There has to be a bit of passion there," James continued.
"Good actors don't need tongues to portray passion," Karl sneered, "You both need to realize we only have 15 minutes to film this scene and the next so I would appreciate some co-operation if that isn't not too much to ask."
They looked at each other and silently agreed they had better finish this scene off properly, which they did in the next take, but James still hadn't finished his ad-libbing.
"Now just play along in the next scene OK," James whispered to Eloise before he disappeared out the door again.
"I really don't think we should push him anymore James," she protested, but he had already closed the door, and Karl was ready to begin. There was nothing she could do but calm herself and go with the flow.
"Action!"
Eloise opened the door nervously, not knowing what to expect. James delivered his lines as scripted, which immediately put her at ease, so she grabbed him and started to kiss him as she was supposed to.
But then he pulled away.
"What?" she asked worried.
"I know its dorky but I've always wanted to do this," he smiled and scooped her up and kissed her as he carried her backstage to what was supposed to be Didge's bedroom. She was shocked at first and couldn't stifle a giggle, but she went with the flow as instructed. It was certainly better than them just standing there kissing.
They both giggled as he put her down backstage and they waited to hear an outcry from Karl.
"Ok that's it people," he said calmly, much to their surprise.
"Good God he must have liked it," Eloise said stunned, "I guess we should go back out."
"Not yet! In a minute," he said as she began to head back onset. He grabbed her hand and slowly pulled her towards him and they let their foreheads rest against each other.
"I missed you," she sighed looking into his eyes.
He was so happy to hear those words from her.
"I was kind of worried that a week away from me would make you realize that you didn't want this, that's its all just too hard," he said as he brushed her hair behind her ears.
She reached out and softly caressed his cheek, "It is too hard. Its hard having to keep my distance, hard not being able to shout to the rooftops how I really feel about you. But I could never give this up, not now."
"Me either," he said relieved, "and I hate not being able to do this."
He slowly brushed his lips against hers, but she pulled away and took a step back.
"So what are you saying," she asked as she searched his eyes.
"I'm saying that I can't live by the rules anymore. This week away from you made me realize just how much you mean to me. But I want more…I want you…completely," he whispered sadly.
This declaration excited her, but also made her nervous. She knew she was crazy about him but she didn't think they should take their relationship any further while they had to work so closely together every day. She thought they had agreed about the status of their relationship and how it had to be for the time being. The fact that he was now putting pressure on started to annoy her. She didn't know how to respond to him and for once she was relieved to see Karl's face appear around the corner.
"Well you're lucky I liked it," he remarked, his tone making it perfectly clear that he wasn't too happy about liking it.
James was far from impressed by the interruption.
"Um…yeah! That's great Karl," James said as he gave him the evil eye, "but we are kind of in the middle of something here if you don't mind."
Eloise needed to get out of there.
"No its fine Karl. We should get back out there," she brushed passed James leaving him there alone and confused, and he began to doubt if she really did want a future with him after all.
Tbc…
DISCLAIMER - This story is fictional and in no way reflects the actions or day to day activites of the characters involved. In other words..ITS MADE UP!!
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Post by kate on Sept 7, 2009 20:59:41 GMT
Love it Suse. Go you! Deffo include me on the pm list for future chapters.
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Post by suse on Sept 13, 2009 11:50:46 GMT
Ok! It's back. I have added a disclaimer just to cover our butts.
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Post by rebeccag on Sept 13, 2009 14:09:02 GMT
hehe thats great suse. the director getting annoyed and saying cut all the time made me laugh
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Post by Ali on Sept 14, 2009 10:23:09 GMT
fabulous as usual!
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Post by maggi1980 on Sept 14, 2009 14:25:08 GMT
Thank you for the well anticipated return. I loved every minute of this. Love how you have had to put disclaimers in. I mean as much as some people want this to be the truth we know it isn't. Someone on Neighbours obviosly thought it was a little too close for comfort though!!!
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Post by jeffiner1892 on Sept 15, 2009 15:19:25 GMT
Yay, it's back.
I can understand why they might think that though, James was said to be "devastated" when Eloise left. (according to Inside Soap anyway)
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Post by maggi1980 on Sept 16, 2009 11:25:12 GMT
Maybe theres hope yet! Would be quite funny if they have been on here and read it! Imagine that!!!
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Post by kate on Sept 16, 2009 11:58:19 GMT
No offence to you Suse but I really really really really really really hope they never read this. Unless it were to give them ideas *wink wink*.
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Post by smilelino on Sept 16, 2009 12:26:01 GMT
I hope we soon get an update. I am loving this story.
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