Post by jess on Oct 5, 2010 10:00:24 GMT
i wrote this as i short story that i may write in the school certificate and i based it on Bridget and Declan ( but no one knew that) i made it so they were both in a car accident
please tell me what you think
I Pictured myself in a boat on a river, with Tangerine trees and marmalade skies, somebody called to me and I opened my eyes, A woman stood on the bank of the river no older than eighteen, No Younger than seventeen, as the boat came to a holt, the woman and I came face to face
As the sun burned the air turned fiery, he looked at her, her hair swaying lightly in the breeze, Glinting in the sunlight,
She opened her mouth to like she was trying to say something but no words came out, my hand slowly reached for her face feeling her soft delicate skin , her brown curls lightly brushing my hands, she smiled a sad smile and then backed away from me, I tried to go after her but the air got between us lighting a fire that stood strong I watched her go until the trees closed and I could see her no more, My Life, My Soul, My Everything
**************
When I returned to the world I realised she hadn’t , my world tumbled down
People said that they could help me, no one could, it wouldn’t bring her back , people told me how sorry they were, but they had no idea what I was feeling , people thought I was coping but behind all the fake smiles they just don’t know how much pain im in and almost broken.
When at home I sat in our room , all the memories flooded back, it had been left the way she left it not knowing that when she walked out it would be the last time
When the pain became unbearable I left the house the only time I left the house was when it was raining no one could tell I was crying that way, I felt so lost now that she not by my side, the rain got heavier and splashed everywhere , but I didn’t care, she still wasent here
Night times were always the best times, I sat under the stars with a picture of she beside me , I looked up because I knew that she were watching me
The fire had now gone out all that was left was the air , cold and dark , like my state of mind sending a shiver down my spine,
As I rested my head I felt her watching me, I drifted into a cold uneasy sleep
Is this our Farewell
I don’t think so
We Will meet again
But Only in my dreams
please tell me what you think
I Pictured myself in a boat on a river, with Tangerine trees and marmalade skies, somebody called to me and I opened my eyes, A woman stood on the bank of the river no older than eighteen, No Younger than seventeen, as the boat came to a holt, the woman and I came face to face
As the sun burned the air turned fiery, he looked at her, her hair swaying lightly in the breeze, Glinting in the sunlight,
She opened her mouth to like she was trying to say something but no words came out, my hand slowly reached for her face feeling her soft delicate skin , her brown curls lightly brushing my hands, she smiled a sad smile and then backed away from me, I tried to go after her but the air got between us lighting a fire that stood strong I watched her go until the trees closed and I could see her no more, My Life, My Soul, My Everything
**************
When I returned to the world I realised she hadn’t , my world tumbled down
People said that they could help me, no one could, it wouldn’t bring her back , people told me how sorry they were, but they had no idea what I was feeling , people thought I was coping but behind all the fake smiles they just don’t know how much pain im in and almost broken.
When at home I sat in our room , all the memories flooded back, it had been left the way she left it not knowing that when she walked out it would be the last time
When the pain became unbearable I left the house the only time I left the house was when it was raining no one could tell I was crying that way, I felt so lost now that she not by my side, the rain got heavier and splashed everywhere , but I didn’t care, she still wasent here
Night times were always the best times, I sat under the stars with a picture of she beside me , I looked up because I knew that she were watching me
The fire had now gone out all that was left was the air , cold and dark , like my state of mind sending a shiver down my spine,
As I rested my head I felt her watching me, I drifted into a cold uneasy sleep
Is this our Farewell
I don’t think so
We Will meet again
But Only in my dreams
