Once Upon A Story

[jess]

Once Upon a astory


Once upon a story
Hides a classic fairytale
Cinderella loses her shoe a the ball
Except whats the story behind that
Only of two people
A Prince by the name of Declan
And a servant by the name of Bridget
When the prince learns the meaning of feelings
And the servant learns to love
Will Cinderella ever find her shoe
Theres only one way to find out

Stay tuned

The story popped into my head when we were studying a cinderella text in English and I had to write it update will dome soon

[jeffiner1892]

Ooh, sounds good!

[jess]

thanks i dont know how im going to write it yet but im sure ill find a way

[jess]

A story almost always begins with the classic one upon a time except in this version its more like a what happened first rather then once upon a time Once upon a story tells a story of a servant and the prince something that is forbidden.


Once Upon A Story

A young woman ran out of the ballroom

Having her identity revealed

“ please Declan”
The crowed gasped

The Prince turned around
“ you will no longer address me by my personal name you will address me as either being sir or your highness do you understand”

With tears streaming down her face Bridget ran straight out of the ballroom leaving behind a small glass slipper

The Prince being hurt the way he had been turned back towards his mother and father he looked sober he stormed back to the castle

13 years earlier


A 5 year old Bridget was squirming about on her chair while one of her fathers servants was trying to do her hair

“ come on hush now youll never look like a young lady if you don’t sit still” she laughed

“ I just want to see Papa” she said staring into the mirror

“ well youll never impress the countess and her two daughters looking the way you did this morning covered in mud”

“ Au Gust got what what coming for him” she said knowing that he had gone hone with mud all over him

The trumpets sounded

“ Papa” Bridget shouted and ran out before the servant was finished with her
She ran outside and pushed the doors open

There was her father riding his horse and a carriage carrying her step – mother and her two sisters in it

Her father climbed down from his horse
“ Papa” she shouted

She ran up to him and he picked her up and hugged her
“ have you been a good little lady” her father asked
Bridget nodded
“ ive got some people for you to meet” he said putting Bridget down


And he went over to the carriage and opened the door

A young girl about her age stepped out the carriage and took her fathers hand and then stepped down

Another young girl stepped out but looked at little bit older than the last one

And then her father helped the countess out
She stepped down and looked around
“ Countess Amilda de tanhnt” ( prounounced like tant) I would like you to meet someone very special to me

The countess stepped forward

“ this is Bridget” her father said proudly


“ so this is the famous Bridget , well ive heard quite a lot about you your father speaks of you highly” she said

“ these are my two daughters”

She looked to her left

“Elizabeth”

She looked to her right

“ and Victoria”

They both bowed at the same time

“ pleasure “ they both said


Hours later Bridget was getting ready for bed and her father was tucking her in

“ did you see the way they ate their supper it was so proper” Bridget laughed

“ well they are quite proper” her father said laughing

“ I brought a book back for you” Papa said taking a book out from his coat and handing it to her

“ Cinderella” she said confused

“ about a girl losing a slipper” her father said

“ well that’s silly all she has to do is look to find it” Bridget said

Her father opened the book and began to read

“ Once Upon a time there was a young girl ……” after reading a while Papa looked down from reading he saw that she had fallen asleep , he gently placed the book down beside her and tucked her in and kissed her forehead

“ goodnight my angel” he smiled and walked out