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Post by jess on Jan 10, 2010 8:50:53 GMT
i can assure you that isnt it
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Post by suse on Jan 10, 2010 9:54:38 GMT
Phew!!!!!!!
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Post by jess on Jan 10, 2010 10:01:23 GMT
im actually wondering if i should make Kate an Evil Phyco
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Post by suse on Jan 10, 2010 11:27:47 GMT
Oh yes please ;D. We have to get rid of her somehow!
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Post by jess on Jan 10, 2010 12:02:55 GMT
cool that fits into my plans for the ending now off the brainstorm
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Post by jess on Jan 11, 2010 2:03:16 GMT
Chapter 27 When Its Christmas Part 3
Declan and Bridget arrived at the park with India “ you can go play now sweetie” Bridget said to India She smiled and ran over to the playground Bridget slightly laughed And then she turned to Declan “ you sure Kate dosent mind you coming down with us” Bridget asked Declan remembered back to that morning when he had gotton home form Bridgets Declan had walked through the door of his house And the light had turned on “ where have you been” Kate said “ been over at Zekes” Declan said “ well how come I saw you going over to Bridgets” Kate said “ India was having some trouble sleeping” Declan said “ couldn’t Bridget have dealt with that” Kate said “ she really needed some help” Declan said “ she really needed help for 4 hours” Kate said “ what are yo worried or something my daughter was having trouble sleeping” “ we hardly ever see each other anymore when was the last time we went on a date since you found out about India” Kate said Declan didn’t answer “ Declan anyone would think that I wasn’t your girlfriend” Kate said Declan sighed annoyed “ Kate if I didn’t love you I would’ve already left you by now” Declan almost shouted and went back to his room “ Declan” Bridget said “ umm yeah she's cool with it” Declan said Bridget smiled And they set down the blanket And got out the food “ steak sandwiches yum” Declan said “ I know its your favourite so I thought id make them” Didge said Declan smiled at her And they both turned around to watch India play “ can you believe she's ours” Declan said “ I know” Bridget said Declan reached into his backpack “ here ive got something for you” Declan said And he pulled out a Christmas present “ Dec you didn’t have to get me anything” Didge said “ well I did” Declan said handing to her “ well it’s a good thing I have something for you to” Didge said “ just open yours first” Declan said slightly laughing Didge smiled as she opened her present It was the photo of her Declan and India but it was in a frame “ its perfect Dec thankyou” Didge said smiling “ its ok” Declan said “ your presents at home it’s a box of things from when India was a baby you know home videos and photos” Didge said “ thankyou that’s really nice” Declan said After having lunch they went back to the house When Donna came in “ hey I was thinking of going out with everyone on new years eve” Donna said Declan and Bridget looked at each other “ oh come on itll be fun” Donna said “ fine but I am not getting drunk” Didge said “ sounds fun” Declan said “ great” Donna said bouncing out Declan and Bridget smiled at each other Before they looked over at India playing
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Post by jess on Jan 11, 2010 2:05:00 GMT
Chapter 28 More dreams to come
Didge had just put India down to bed and she headed off to her own bed And she looked over to the photo Declan had given her for Christmas She smiled and closed her eyes As she began to dream she found herself in a house She looked around and heard a piano it sounded soft and sweet She followed the sound into a little room with a piano in it And sitting at the piano was Declan Bridgets POV He gave me a long look before he turned to the keys And then his fingers flew so softly over the keys and the room was filled with music , so beautiful It was impossible to believe only one set of hands were playing Declan looked at me casually not stopping on the piano and the music surrounded the air between us “ do you like it?” he said softly “ you wrote this” I said in amazement He nodded I closed my eyes as I listned to the music “ whats wrong” he asked me “ nothing I was just listning” I said opening my eyes The music slowed transforming into something softer “ you inspired this one” he said to me I smiled and walked over to him and sat down next to him The music became unbearably sweet I was speechless He stopped playing but the music continued on He took my hands in his “ I love you” he said to me “ you are the most important thing in my life” he said again He got up and held his hand out to me The music still didn’t stop I took his hand and he helped me up He took me into the middle of the room He took my hand and placed it on his shoulder And I put my head on his shoulder “ im right here, I love you and I always have loved you and I always will love you” Declan said I knew this was wrong but I couldn’t help it “ before you Bridget my life was an endless night very dark but now you’ve come I see” Declan whispered in my ear “ and then there was fire and I saw brilliance and beauty” Declan whispered it made me tear up a bit He then let go of me And backed away a bit “ look after my heart, ive left it with you” he smiled softly and left the room The music hadn’t stopped I ran after him and caught up with him in the next room “ id rather die than be with anyone else but you” I said He turned around and came forward over to me He brushed away my hair and held my face in his hands “ you are the very best part of me” he whispered “ I never want to let you go” I said “ ill never let you go as long as your mine” Declan said “ promise me we will stay like this forever” I said “ I promise” he said And he leant in closer And he kissed me And that’s when Bridget opened her eyes “ crap” she sighed loudly
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Post by suse on Jan 11, 2010 6:06:13 GMT
Awwww...that was gorgeous Jess. You described her dream beautifully.
Loved it ;D.
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Post by jess on Jan 12, 2010 12:58:05 GMT
" youve been awfully quite today" " sorry ive been thinking" " what about" " i cant tell you here'
whats Bridget about to reveal that could turn more than one life upside down
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Post by mellochino on Jan 13, 2010 10:16:23 GMT
Keep up the good work, Jess! I can't wait to read the next part
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Post by suse on Jan 13, 2010 20:04:36 GMT
Can't wait Jess ;D.
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Post by jess on Jan 15, 2010 8:02:26 GMT
Chapter 29 Looking with different eyes
Bridget got up the next morning not thinking about anything but her dream She just had flashes of Declan at a piano looking up at her She dropped India off with Donna and headed over to Charlies with Rachel “ you’ve been awfully quiet today” Rachel said as they walked into Charlies “ sorry ive just been thinking” “ what about” Rachel asked “ nothing really” Bridget replied They sat down at a table What she didn’t realise was Declan was working today He looked up at her and he smiled Which made Bridget flashback in grey When Declan looked up from the piano And then she flashed back into reality Declan came over “ what can I get you guys” Declan said But Bridget wasent listening images flashing through her mind “ do you like it” his voice flared though her head “ you inspired this one” “ Didge” Declan was saying He waited “ Didge” he waved a hand infront of her “ huh” she said coming back “ what do you want to eat” Declan said “ oh im not hungry thanks” Didge said Declan gave a slight nod Bridget flashed back again “ I love you” “ I saw brilliance and beauty” “ I promise” When she came back again Rachel had finished eating “ ok what is going on with you you’ve been acting weird all day” Rachel said “ nothing” Bridget said “ yes there is come on tell me” Rachel said “ ok but I cant tell you here” Bridget said Its like Rachel read her mind and they both got up and paid and then went back to No.26 “ ok so what is it”Rachel said “ you are going to blow at when when I tell you” Bridget said “ so go” Rachel said “ ok …… I think im falling for him” Bridget said after a long while “ oh Bridget why” Rachel said sighing “ I don’t know I cant help it” Didge said “ how” Rachel said she explained the kissed they shared and the time they slept together “ is he going to tell Kate” Rachel asked “ no we promised each other wed keep it a secret you have to as well” Didge said ‘ I will but what are you going to do” Rachel asked “ i guess I just have to get over it” Bridget said thinking more into it
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Post by smilelino on Jan 15, 2010 10:19:44 GMT
No, don't get over it Didge. Talk to dec. That's what she should do. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks very much.
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Post by mellochino on Jan 15, 2010 10:53:22 GMT
I can't wait to read what happens next. I'm hoping they'll get together soon
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Post by suse on Jan 15, 2010 20:34:55 GMT
Eeek! Nice update Jess. They have to get together soon...its killing me .
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