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Post by smilelino on Jun 3, 2010 8:48:41 GMT
Such a sad chapter but beautiful written. I really loved reading it, but i also was nearly welling up. Thanks for this amazing chapter.
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Post by jess on Jun 3, 2010 9:05:05 GMT
wow thanx Smilelino i appreciate it
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Post by Bee on Jun 3, 2010 10:43:05 GMT
aww that was beautiful!!
cant wait for more!!
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Post by jess on Jun 25, 2010 7:45:56 GMT
Chapter 46 It’s a feeling my heart cant undo
It began pelting down as Declan stared ahead as he walked back to his car His face tear stained Bridget sat on the plane her face tear stained But she was still crying she held India close and cryed She bucked India into her seat and fell asleep pretty quickly she kissed the top of her head and then stared out the window at the cold and rain Declan sat in his car staring at the rain on the window then he remembered the note that was still in his hand he unfolded itnand saw Bridget’s handwriting on it he ran his hand over it Then he read the note
Declan
It’s hard for me to sit here and write this knowing that when you read this India and I will not be there , but although we wont be there with you , we will still be with you no matter where you go, and you will be with us , I will not let India forget her daddy so you will still be apart of us no matter what, please understand why I did this and im so sorry for breaking your heart again, please know this Nothing will stop me from loving you and I hope that’s the same for you All my love Bridget
Declan folded up the note and put his head in his hands Bridget looked out at the clouds as the plane was in the air ,Bridget took out a photo in her wallet of the three of them she cryed more because her family was no longer together Declan drove back home and sat on the couch thinking about Bridget and India, he slammed his fists against the table not realising how much this was having affected him Bridget stared at India while she slept peacefully , she knew she was going to miss her daddy and stared out at the clouds wondering what was meant to happen now Declan layed on the couch staring at the roof Kate came through the door “ where the hell have you been” she half yelled “ not now Kate” Declan said “ yes now” Kate said Declan sat up “ what” he said irritably “ would you like to explain to me where you’ve been all night” Kate said annoyed “ I was sorting stuff out” Declan said putting his head in his hands “ what stuff” Kate asked confused “ that’s all you need to know” Declan said as he got up to go to the fridge After a long flight and a few tantrums with India the plane landed and as soon as she came out there was Daniel waiting for her She put on a fake smile as she was feeling miserable “ hi” Daniel said coming over to her “ hi” Bridget said as Daniel kissed her “ ewww” India Giggled Bridget stopped kissing Daniel and laughed at India Bridget took India’s hand as they went to go get luggage “ so where’s Noah” Bridget asked Daniel “ hes at his mothers im gonna pick him up later” Daniel said taking Bridget’s suitcase “ alright lets go” Daniel said taking them to his car Declan sat in Charlie’s bar alone with a drink, after a while Ringo joined him “ hey mate” Ringo said “ hi” Declan said sadly “ has she arrived yet” Ringo asked “ bout an hour ago” Declan said They sat in silence for a few minutes “ cheer up mate now you can move on with your life” Ringo said “ thing is I don’t want to” Declan said Daniel, India and Bridget arrived at their new home “ welcome home” Daniel said Daniel put their suitcases and showed them to their rooms “ im going to pick up Noah will you be alright here” Daniel asked “ we’ll be fine” Bridget said “ ill see you later” Daniel walked out and left Bridget wondering how the transfer of universitys worked until India came out “ come here baby” she said as she picked up India and sat on the couch with her cuddling her “ come on Dec ok now you don’t have to worry about India and you can settle down with Kate” Ringo said “ what if I don’t want to” Declan said “ well I don’t know” Ringo said after a long pause “ hes won” Declan sighed
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Post by smilelino on Jun 25, 2010 10:13:09 GMT
I really hoped that Didge would change her mind and stay. Now i can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for updating it again. I love this story.
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Post by Bee on Jun 25, 2010 11:39:27 GMT
thanks for the update (: cant wait for more!
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Post by jess on Jul 9, 2010 5:18:22 GMT
Spoilers
Bridget tries to settle into her new home Declan dosent want to forget about Bridget or India and gets sick of everyone asking if hes alright Rachel and Donna put two and two together and discover what Bridget and Declan have been up to
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Post by smilelino on Jul 9, 2010 6:47:29 GMT
cant wait. Sounds promising.
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Post by jess on Jul 9, 2010 7:34:51 GMT
Chapter 47 What Now
“ what do you mean hes won” Ringo asked Declan took another sip of his beer “ long story” Declan said “ you have a lot of long stories don’t you” Ringo said “ unfortunately its like my life revolves around them sometimes” Declan said “ ive got time if you need to talk” Ringo said “ it feels like its all I ever do” Declan said feeling frustrated “ alright well whenever you need to” “ thanks mate not tonight” Declan said leaving some money for the beer and left Bridget sat on the leather couch in Daniel’s home or her home now it didn’t feel like her house, maybe in time it would, it was getting close to dinner time and she thought maybe she should cook dinner As she was cooking she looked around at the photos there was photos of Daniels family she's guessed out his mother and father and his ex – wife “ im bored” India’s voice came from the hallway Bridget turned her attention to her daughter “ can I have my toys” “ no sweetheart there still in boxes” Bridget said India folder her arms and didn’t look impressed “ come on Indy why don’t we watch a movie” Bridget said “ NO!! I want my toys” India said in a huff “ India Parker don’t you talk to me like that” Bridget said very sternly “ Daddy would let me have my toys” India said “ well your father isn’t here” Bridget said going back to cooking “ I wish I lived with him” India said angrily “ what did you say” Bridget said sternly again “ I wish I could live with daddy hes more fun” India shouted “ India Parker go to your room and stay there” Bridget shouted India looked like she was about to cry at being shouted at “ go on” Bridget said feeling frustrated India walked sadly to her room and Bridget felt guilty for yelling at her but she would talk to India later and sort it out, Daniel came home with Noah “ hey” Daniel said coming in and kissing her on the cheek “ hi” Bridget said and looked over at Noah “ hi Noah” she said to him “ wheres India” Noah asked shyly “ she's in her room if you want to go play” Bridget said to him “ Noah nodded and then went to find India “ whys India in her room I thought she would be out here with you” “ she had a huff and we had an argument I sent her to her room” “ what about” “ she wanted her toys but I said no because there still in boxes and then she said she wished she lived with Declan” “ itll be alright” Bridget began finishing up dinner and serving it “ you didn’t have to cook your supposed to let me do that tonight” Daniel said “ well I felt I needed to I suppose it’s a habit” Bridget said “ well it looks delicious” Daniel said as she put the plates on the table When Declan arrived home Kate was putting dinner on the table “ dinners ready” she said “ thank you” he said quietly and stood there uncomfortably “ well come and sit down” Kate said Declan slowly walked over and sat down and began eating “ Dec are you alright” Kate asked “ im fine” he said pushing food around his plate “ I don’t think you are, you haven’t been since this afternoon” “ well I am you don’t have to worry about me” “ you’ve barely touched your dinner” “ im not hungry” Declan said “ you should eat something” “ ive gotta go to work” he said getting up and taking his plate to the sink “ I didn’t know you had work tonight” “ yeah I have a night shift don’t wait up” he kissed her cheek and left for Charlies “ right on time” Rebecca said as Declan walked in, Rebecca took her apron off “ are you right to lock up tonight” Rebecca asked Declan nodded “ are you alright” Rebecca asked “ I wish everyone would stop asking me that” he said taking a cloth and wiping down tables “ just asking you don’t look so good” Rebecca said Declan said nothing “ alright ill see you later” Rebecca said “ bye” Declan said without looking at her and Rebecca walked away As Declan worked he wondered about India and how much he missed her right now then he thought about Bridget was she happy? Donna and Rachel came in and sat down and Declan came and handed them menu’s “ how you guys doing” Declan asked “ just talking about things” Rachel said “ mainly Bridget and Indy” Dona said interrupting “ we miss her already” Rachel said “ know how you feel I cant think about anything else” Declan said “ yeah im sure itll get easier” Rachel said “ I don’t want it to” Declan said walking off “ he is so lovesick” Donna said “ he cant be lovesick about Didge” Rachel said “ hello have you not seen the signs” Donna said “what do you mean” Rachel asked “ ive been thinking about this for a while do you remember when we all went out for new years eve” Donna asked “ yeah” “ well you remember how we didn’t see them for half the night and when we found them we said we were going to get a room at lassiters” Donna said “ do you have a point to all this” Rachel asked “ I think they were doing more in that room than just sleeping” Donna said Rachel thought for a moment “ oh my god there in love” Rachel said everything in her head making sense “ it makes sense to me all the tension when she first came back why they weren’t around” Donna said “ they’ve been going behind Kate’s back I know that but it explains why Declan was so funny around Daniel” Rachel said “ unless Bridget comes back with India I don’t think Declan is ever going to recover” Donna said “ then we need to find a way to get her back” Rachel said
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Post by jess on Aug 14, 2010 9:28:53 GMT
Donna tries to get Declan to admit the truth will she succeed Declan begins having strange dreams what do they mean When Bridget drops of Noah she gets a message from his mother is she in trouble India begins to miss her daddy and Bridget decided its time for Declan to come and visit
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Post by smilelino on Aug 22, 2010 16:56:43 GMT
thanks for updating. The girls really need to help them. Cant wait for more.
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Post by jess on Sept 12, 2010 6:45:56 GMT
Declan tiredly stumbled out of bed the next morning and found that Kate was already gone, he yawned and then there was a loud knock at the door “ who the hell comes at this time” Declan said looking at the clock seeing it was 7:30 He made his way to the door and opened it to see Donna, he groaned “ morning grumpy” Donna said flying past him into the kitchen “ Donna its 7:30 what are you even doing up this early” Declan said yawning again “ I was up doing some thinking this morning” Donna said Declan didn’t answer “ wait is this one of those chick things where you want advice because Kate’s at the store if you want her” Declan answered “ no I was thinking about New Years Eve” Donna said Declan suddenly found a flashback coming on he remembered dancing with Bridget and waking up the next morning “ what about it” Declan said “ I was thinking about how things went on that night and how we all met up and how great it was we should do something like that again” Donna said “ yeah maybe” Declan said fiddling with a spoon “ wish I knew where Rachel went that night I barely saw her” Donna said “ who knows you know what Rach is like when she goes into her own head” Declan said remembering that he had to work soon “ come to think of it I didn’t see you and Didge either that night” Donna said looking straight at Declan “ we got rooms at Lassiters” Declan said “ but I thought you guys were drunk” Donna said “ ive gotta go Donna um work now alright ill see you later” he closed the door and sighed “ she's onto us” Declan sighed Bridget was serving India and Noah breakfast she couldn’t believe it had been 5 months since she had moved in yet everything was only just starting to settle down She received a text from Daniel asking her to drop of Noah of to his mums house after preschool as he was working late he gave her the address She dropped India and Noah off to preschool and then didn’t know what to do with herself After a while she thought she would go for a walk but then it was raining Bridget sighed a little irritated then drove back to her house where she began reading a book and before she knew it , it was time to pick up Noah and India “ how was it” she asked India and Noah as they came up to her “boring” Noah replied “ fun” India replied “ we did painting today I painted one of a mermaid” India said excitedly “ I did a snowman” Noah said “ can I see them” Bridget asked “ no they are still wet” Noah said “ well come on then lets go” Bridget said taking both of their hands and leading them to the car They all went into the car “ Noah have you got all your things for you mothers house” Bridget asked “ yes” he replied “ alright good well lets go” Bridget said starting the car New Zealand was colder this time of the year as Bridget drove along the road she looked at the window at the dull sky and wondered when it would get warmer that was one of the things she missed After a short time they arrived at Noah’s mothers house After she rang the doorbell a woman answered the door “ hello” she said shyly “ hi im Bridget I brought Noah over” Bridget said “ you must be Daniel’s girlfriend please come in” she said opening the door more widely Bridget got a good look at her she was tall and had blonde hair like Noah but the thing Bridget was staring at was the big round bruise on her face on her cheek She looked up quickly Noah had gone in already “ please come in” she said and Bridget came in with India And they sat down “ whats the little ones name” she asked “ India Miranda Parker” Bridget replied “ I like it” she said They watched India and Noah play for a little bit “ so when did you and Daniel get together” she asked “ about 5 months ago” Bridget replied smiling “ the reason we split up is something you would never guess” she said “ what happened” Bridget asked more intrigued “ Daniel isn’t who you think he is” she said “ what do you mean” Bridget asked “ you see this” she pointed to her cheek Bridget nodded “ he did this to me” “ what” “ I see Daniel’s girlfriends each one is nicer than the last, but his relationships last no more than a year because this is what he does” she said through tears “ he hit you” Bridget said shocked She nodded’ “ leave while you can” she warned her Bridget nodded and said bye to Noah then hurried out the door with India As she drove along she could not stop thinking about what Noah’s mother had said As Declan arrived home from he yawned and sat down on the couch and eventually layed down on the couch and closed his eyes, he began dreaming There was a blonde headed woman and a little girl with brown hair, she looked like India but he still didn’t know who the woman was , he saw her looking at photo albums while the little girl was playing on the floor with some of her toys “ its true” the woman said shocked “ whats true mummy” the little girl asked Then Declan realised the little girl was India and the woman was Bridget “ im home” a voice called Bridget looked shocked and tried to hide the album but Daniel had already walked in “ what are you doing” Daniel asked “ i… um… your home early” Bridget said “ yes what are you doing” Daniel repeated “ I was just looking through your photos” “ she told you” After a while Bridget nodded slowly “ Why would you do such a thing” Bridget asked “ because they all get in the way sooner or later” “ what is your problem” “ my problem is you” Then Daniel went and whacked Bridget across the face She fell to her knees and put her hand to her face “ mummy” India went over to her mother and hugged her “ its alright sweetie” Bridget said through light tears “ and just so you don’t try anything im sure you don’t want anything to happen to your one and only daughter” “ you stay away from her” Bridget said
And then Declan woke up with a shock “ Dec are you alright” Kate asked Declan soon realised Kate was there “ yeah im fine” The phone rang and Declan picked it up “ hello” “ hi Dec its Bridget” “ Didge how are you” Declan asked still thinking about his dream “ im good thanks” she sound cheerful “ listen Indy’s been missing you a lot lately and I thought maybe you would like to come up and stay for a while” Bridget asked “ id love to” Declan said smiling
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Post by Bee on Sept 12, 2010 8:09:00 GMT
ooh this is getting interesting Jess...cant wait for more!!
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Post by jess on Sept 12, 2010 9:19:38 GMT
Chapter 49 The Time to act is now
After Bridget got off the phone with Declan she discussed it with Daniel and he agreed Bridget went into India’s room “ Indy guess what” “ you’re a monkey” she said giggling “ no” Bridget said laughing a little “ I know you’ve been missing your daddy haven’t you” Bridget asked “ yes” India said firmly “ would you like it if daddy came to visit us for a little bit” Bridget asked As soon as she said that there was a squeal of excitement from India and she stood and began running around shouting “ Daddy’s coming” Daniel walked in and India almost ran into him but she kept on running “ whoa slow down road runner” he said laughing He went and wrapped his arms around Bridget “ I think she's excited” “ you think” Bridget said “ alright I know she is” Daniel said “ and she's going to be hyper until he gets here” Bridget said laughing Daniel laughed “ thankyou for doing this I know you and Declan didn’t exactly get along” Bridget said “ its alright its makes India happy and I know if she's happy then your happy” They kissed each other “ well sorry but I have to go to work” Daniel kissed her “ already” Bridget said “ yeah sorry got a long day today be back before you know it” he smiled and left After Daniel left all Bridget could hear were India’s footsteps as she still kept running around “ come on monkey slow down” Bridget said India stopped “ im not a monkey!” Bridget caught India and hugged her “ no but you’re my monkey” Bridget said Declan began packing his things he was leaving tonight “ your going to leave just like that” Kate said annoyed “ yes I am im going to see my daughter” Declan said “ of course all Bridget has to do is say the word and your there in a flash you will always choose them over me” Kate said “ here we go again” Declan said “ its true” Kate said “ Kate im going to see my daughter you would do the same” “ theres where your wrong” Kate said “ no your wrong” The air was tense “ look my flight leaves at eight I have to go ill see you when I get back” he left and slammed the door shut and went over to Rebecca’s “ hi mum” “ Dec come in darling” Rebecca said “ hi I just came over to say thanks to Paul” Declan said “ well hes out at the moment but ill tell him for you” Rebecca said Declan nodded “ is there something wrong Dec” Rebecca asked “ im just thinking about a weird dream that I had” “ what about” “ its Bridget I think she's in trouble” “ well you know darling that a true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your heart” Rebecca said Declan listened to this carefully “ alright gotta go thought ill see you when I get back” He hugged Rebecca “ be safe darling” Rebecca said as he walked out the door to go catch his flight Bridget sat on the couch thinking about what Noahs mothers said She then went and grabbed a photos album from her and Daniel’s room and looked through it “ its true” Bridget said shocked “ whats true mummy” lndia asked “ im home” Daniel calld Bridget looked shocked and tried to hide the album but Daniel had already walked in “ what are you doing” Daniel asked “ i… um… your home early” Bridget said “ yes what are you doing” Daniel repeated “ I was just looking through your photos” “ she told you” After a while Bridget nodded slowly “ Why would you do such a thing” Bridget asked “ because they all get in the way sooner or later” “ what is your problem” “ my problem is you” Then Daniel went and whacked Bridget across the face She fell to her knees and put her hand to her face “ mummy” India went over to her mother and hugged her “ its alright sweetie” Bridget said through light tears “ and just so you don’t try anything im sure you don’t want anything to happen to your one and only daughter” “ you stay away from her” Bridget said Daniel threw some hair dye inform of her “ you will do exactly as I say, dye your hair blonde oh and when Declan arrives you will say none of this to him” Daniel said And he walked out Bridget hugged India closer and cried
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Post by mellochino on Sept 15, 2010 12:16:23 GMT
I'm looking forward to what happens next! =) I hope Didge and India are ok.
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