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Post by sophie on Sept 25, 2009 10:33:00 GMT
Ah, please keep the updates coming!
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Post by kate on Sept 25, 2009 10:40:25 GMT
Aww I love fluff. I need to get uptodate with my fanfic reading I'm just recovering from my rage and unhappiness at the sight of the Kate/Declan one I stumbled into though.
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Post by Bee on Sept 25, 2009 10:54:43 GMT
eww kate and declan is so not on
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Post by Bee on Sept 25, 2009 10:55:16 GMT
ooh thanks for the comments too (:
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Post by suse on Sept 25, 2009 11:06:15 GMT
I have been lucky enough not to stumble into any yet...and I have been looking.
Yes more fluff please ;D.
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Post by Bee on Sept 27, 2009 15:39:51 GMT
DECLAN’S P.O.V I groaned as my daughter continued to kick up a fuss and not eat the baby food I was trying to spoon into her mouth. I was still at the wedding, I wanted my daughter to eat the food, drink the milk so that Ringo and Donna could take her home with them and me and Bridget could have a dance. Bridget looked from India to me, “Let me try”. I handed Bridget the baby food and the spoon, India took the food that Bridget gave her. “How did you do that!” I yelped. “You have to make faces at her and make her laugh” Bridget explained. I made a face at India who laughed and Bridget shoved the spoon into her mouth. We continued to do this for a while, til the jar was empty, taking it in turns to make faces at her and make her laugh.
REBECCA’S P.O.V I was dancing with Paul when I spotted my son and daughter in law feeding my granddaughter, they looked like such a cute little family, Declan made a face that made India laugh…and me, and Bridget instantly shoved food into India’s mouth. The song had just ended so I wandered over there, “Hi guys”. Declan and Bridget both looked up at me, both had tears in their eyes from laughing so much, India was now grabbing for the jar of baby food which was in Bridget’s hand. “Hi mum” Declan got up and hugged me, “Congratulations, I didn’t get to say that before, cause Paul took you away”. “Thanks sweetheart, how’s this precious little one going?” I grinned at India who grinned back at me, then attempted to reach for the baby food again. Bridget fed India another spoonful of food then turned to me, “Congratulations Rebecca”. “Thanks Bridget” I smiled at her, she didn’t seem very happy at all for some reason, I made a mental note to find out what was bugging her later. “Anyway Paul wants me back on the dance floor, you two have fun tonight yeah?” I told them and walked back out to my husband.
DECLAN’S P.O.V I sat back down and watched my wife feed our daughter the last of the jar of food, India started crying after she finished the jar. “There’s none left sweetie” Bridget told her putting her dummy in, “Dec can you go make her a bottle?”. “Yep” I got up and took the formula and bottle out of the nappy bag.
DIDGE’S P.O.V I tried to ignore the cramps I was feeling in my stomach, I knew that they were not normal at all, but I couldn’t, then my underwear started to feel wet and I couldn’t figure out why. “Donna, Ringo, can you watch her?” I asked getting up from my chair. Donna smiled “Yeah of course”. I thanked her then hurried off to the toilets, this really was not normal at all, I rushed into a cubicle and collapsed on the floor, I breathed in heavily, ‘it feels like I’m in labour’ was all I could think. I looked at my dress and realised that that wet feeling, was my own blood, ‘oh god this isn’t good’ I thought, I pulled my phone out of my jacket pocket and dialled Declan’s number. “Dec….help” I cried out as another cramp hit me…then I passed out.
*last update for probably a week, queensland tomorrow but i thought i should post this up beforehand*
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Post by kate on Sept 27, 2009 16:07:55 GMT
Loved it. Especially the facemaking bit. But oh no! Poor Didge! I thought this was meant to be the happy alternative story, godamn you Lia!
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Post by sophie on Sept 27, 2009 18:59:57 GMT
This is too sad! Gah, I can't wait a week! (Well, I can, obviously, but I don't want to!). Awesome as always but I hope everything turns out okay for Bridget and the baby
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Post by jess on Sept 27, 2009 20:16:47 GMT
wow Lia you definatly know how to leave a cliffhanger dam it i cant wait a week
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Post by Bee on Oct 3, 2009 12:34:44 GMT
DECLAN'S P.O.V I was walking back to the table with the bottle i had just made in my hand, when i got the phone call from my wife. She said just two words, "Dec, Help", i dropped the bottle as i yelled into the phone there was no answer, India started crying so i handed her the bottle, then asked Donna and Ringo to keep an eye on her.
Mum and Paul were dancing a short way away so i ran to them "Do you know where Didge went?" i asked. "She went into the womens toilets about 5 minutes ago Dec, whats wrong...." Mum answered. I didnt reply i just ran full bolt into the toilets and found a woman kneeling next to Didge. "are you her boyfriend?" she asked, "Declan right?". "Yeah i am her husband, how'd you know my name?" i asked. "She keeps muttering Declan, India, Peanut over and over" she told me. "Has anyone called an ambulance?" i asked panicked, "Oh god theres blood!' i spotted blood on the ground, "quick call an ambulance!". "Relax it's done!" she said, "My daughter has just called them then". "Mum, their coming" a thirteen year old girl said. But all i could think was, "Daughter, oh god". "Peanut please be in there" i put my hand on my wifes stomach. Ambulance workers ran in soon after and started fussing over Didge, "Hi are you a relation?". "I'm her husband, she's pregnant, please save my baby girl" I had tears running down my face". "we need to get her to hospital now, you can ride in the ambulance" they told me. I rushed out after them and Donna met me outside holding India. "Can you babysit her tonight" i asked Donna, "Bridgets bleeding, i think we might have lost Peanut". "Dont worry we will" Donna smiled, "Let me know how it goes". I climbed into the ambulance praying for the life of my second daughter to be spared.
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Post by jeffiner1892 on Oct 3, 2009 12:50:43 GMT
Poor Declan. Hope Peanut is ok.
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Post by suse on Oct 3, 2009 13:01:53 GMT
Oh No..great update.
I hope she is OK. Hurry with the next bit.
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Post by sophie on Oct 3, 2009 13:33:18 GMT
I'm surprised Donna smiled! Good update though, please post another soon!
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Post by jess on Oct 4, 2009 3:17:08 GMT
omg plwase update soon
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Post by smilelino on Oct 4, 2009 20:36:36 GMT
Thanks for the update. I hope all will be ok.
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