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Post by suse on Oct 6, 2009 10:32:01 GMT
Excellent. This makes me happy ;D.
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Post by Bee on Oct 6, 2009 11:02:51 GMT
BRIDGET'S P.O.V
"I bring baby clothes!" Donna bounced into my room carrying a bag.
I looked up as Declan and India came in as well, then gave him a look and he smirked back.
"Well are you going to look at them?" Donna asked, "I'll take India" she took India from Declan and Declan sat next to me on the bed and picked up an outfit.
"Donna...you know that she's going to be a premmy right?" Declan asked her worried as he held up a pink babysuit big enough to fit India.
"Yeah Yeah that's for Indy i didnt want her to feel left out, these are for Peanut" Donna tipped the rest of the contents on me.
I picked up one of the suits, it was tiny, i put my hand on my belly and Peanut kicked it.
Declan put his hand on my belly and grinned, "Donna i think Peanut likes them".
"She's kicking oh wow!" Donna looked from my belly to India deciding which of our daughters she likes more.
"Donna you can put India on the floor if you want" Declan smirked watching Donna battle with her conscience.
Donna put her down so that she was sitting up and smiling at us then felt Peanut kick, "Oh is that the time, gotta run!" Donna bounced out of the door.
"phewph" Declan laid back and put his arm around me, "She is so....".
"Lively? yeah" I nodded smiling.
"Have your parents talked to you yet?" Declan asked me.
"No Dad hasnt even been in, mum came in while i was sleeping and dropped off some washing".
"Well at least they're doing something for you" Declan smiled at me.
"Yeah.....Dec get India!" i cried as India started crawling towards the used needle bucket.
*crap 2 updates but i feel like i should write now that i dont have hw due til next week*
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Post by jess on Oct 6, 2009 11:25:45 GMT
lol Donna battling her conscience
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Post by smilelino on Oct 6, 2009 18:05:20 GMT
Thank you for this update. It made me smile reading about Donna.
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Post by Bee on Oct 7, 2009 10:44:14 GMT
ahh masssive writers block..ive tried twice now to sit here and write an update..nothing will come...need inspiration!
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Post by sophie on Oct 7, 2009 14:03:18 GMT
How about Didge feeling frustrated due to her situation and then having a row with Dec (with a make-up of course!)? Don't worry if you don't feel like writing of course  |
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Post by suse on Oct 7, 2009 22:21:06 GMT
You can't get writers block on us  ..we are depending on you. |
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Post by Bee on Oct 8, 2009 6:53:05 GMT
i think i can churn out an update tonight...plus im going to melbourne tomorrow so no school yeah!! =D so i wont have hw so i'll try and get as much up as possible
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Post by Bee on Oct 9, 2009 12:58:44 GMT
DIDGE'S P.O.V
"We're doing the deb!" Donna bounced in scaring me, i'd been in hospital for five weeks now, five very long weeks...i was now 24 weeks pregnant, peanut was getting more and more active by the day, India put her hands on my belly yesterday and Declan told her that her sister was in there and India giggled...it was pretty cute.
"when you say we're?" I started.
"you and Declan are too!" Donna squeeled.
i looked at Donna and then at my stomach, "Yeah and how do you think we'll do that when im in bed pregnant!".
"the deb isnt for 4 months!" Donna grinned, "You've gotta ask Declan too the deb!".
"Donna, Declan's my husband..." i started.
"You still have to ask him, its tradition!" Donna concluded, "Ooh here he comes!" Donna said loudly as he walked through the door pushing India's stroller.
Declan stopped dead in his tracks and looked from me to Donna, "Am i missing something".
"Good luck Didge" Donna said, as if Declan might say no.
"Umm?" Declan took India from her pram and handed her to me before sitting next to us.
"Donna was talking about the deb" I explained.
"We cant afford it" Declan shook his head, "We still have to pay rent, pay for this one, and that one" Declan pointed at India then at my belly.
I actually felt a bit put out about this, "So you dont want to?".
Declan looked at me then at India, "It's not a matter of what i want, but these things they cost like thousands of dollars for one night".
"We can borrow the dress off someone, your suit will cost a bit but we can cut down on stuff" I couldnt believe that i was trying to convince my husband to do the deb with me.
Declan shrugged his shoulders, "Why do you want a deb anyway didnt you say that they were lame and sexist?".
"Yes but that's before Donna convinced me, come on lets do it" I nudged my husband.
Declan looked at me and grinned, "Ok then".
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Post by suse on Oct 10, 2009 9:50:30 GMT
Awww! Lovely . They could have had such a beautiful night at the deb..sigh. I think I may cry now  . |
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Post by Bee on Oct 10, 2009 9:56:31 GMT
mm i had to writ about it suse...only change im making is im SORASing everyone so that they still have another year of school to do
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Post by Bee on Oct 11, 2009 11:19:50 GMT
DECLAN'S P.O.V
Oliver slid up next to me at the bar, "Hey Dec, you know how your my most favourite brother in the whole wide world?".
I looked over at Oliver and asked "what do you want?".
"Who says i want anything?" He asked.
"Your talking in the i want my brother to do something voice" I told him.
Oliver shrugged and looked at me, "Ok, i want...actually need you to distract mum for the afternoon and look after Chloe".
"Why what's Carmella doing?" I asked.
"Oh she's coming with me" Oliver told me, "Can you look after Chloe please?".
I looked at the little girl who was standing at Olivers feet, "Fine, BUT, you have to tell me where your going".
"Nowhere" Oliver stiffened up.
"If i'm looking after Chloe so you can have some hanky panky, you have another thing coming..." i started.
Oliver looked at me amused, "Hanky Panky?".
"Well it's the best thing i could come up with, our daughters are here" i hit Oliver with the arm i wasnt using to hold my daughter.
"Anyway i have to go" Oliver tried to leave but i stopped him.
"What's going on?" i asked.
Oliver looked at me, then smiled and said, "Alright we are going to the doctors".
I looked at him weirdly, "Why are you smiling about that?".
"Because Carm took a home pregnancy test and it came out positive" Oliver explained, "I dont want mum to know just yet so dont tell her".
I nodded, "Congrads Bro".
"Thanks mate" Oliver patted me on the back then kissed Chloe goodbye and left.
I made a face at Chloe then took her by the hand, "What say we go visit Auntie Bridget?".
*I have been neglecting this for too long, hope you guys liked this update (:*
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Post by sophie on Oct 11, 2009 11:23:15 GMT
Great update ;D
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Post by kate on Oct 11, 2009 11:27:21 GMT
Aww I do love it! I don't really read that many fanfics anymore apart from this and the other ones here, so it's a nice treat.
I sooo wish this was what was happening instead of, ahem, the current one. Also: do Deb balls really cost around £1000 for the night?!
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Post by Bee on Oct 11, 2009 11:48:56 GMT
well my dress was $1,400...i borrowed it off my step cousin so at least i didnt have to pay for it...umm i think other then that it was about $450 dollars for the dance lessons and dinner and DVD of the deb....plus im looking at the photo form now for the deb photos....
1 10X15cm photo = $13
1 13X18cm photo = $18
1 20X25cm photo = $35
1 28X35cm photo = $80
1 40X50cm photo = $170
so no doubt that'd be an extra couple of hundred for the photos
oh and tickets to our deb were $65 each
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..we are depending on you.
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